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Author Topic: I Want Feedback!!! Please!!  (Read 1308 times)

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August 30, 2013, 02:06:40 AM
Ok so I did this small mix for my guitarist who wrote a song he wanted to do solo. He performed all the musical parts on garageband and then I transfered those stems to CuBase. I recorded his vocals and then mixed the song. Please give me feedback on what I can do to improve the mix

https://soundcloud.com/drummerjosh89/abyss

Thank you
« Last Edit: August 30, 2013, 02:08:21 AM by 19josh89 »

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September 04, 2013, 08:58:33 PM
Hi, I'm new to the forum, and came here from cambridge-mt.
Anyway.
I believe there are a few problems (in my point of view):
- first evident (even visually on soundcloud) bass is too loud. It may be related to weak (non-proper monitoring), that don't let you hear it. I would also try to explore a
- the voice is very thin, dry and high freq eq-ed. I would correct it with some eq (see if there's something in the 800-1kHz that can be pushed up) to give more body to the voice, a de-esser to reduce the sibilance, and a bus with plate reverb to warm it up.
my 2 cents.
Lammy


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September 07, 2013, 01:44:13 PM
Thank you very much :), I'll look into it and fix it :D

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September 07, 2013, 11:22:02 PM
Ok so I think I fixed the mix :), here's the updated link

https://soundcloud.com/drummerjosh89/abyss-by-adam-lancia