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Author Topic: Where The Sunset Sinks  (Read 10090 times)

August 23, 2013, 07:24:46 PM
Where The Sunset Sinks (© 2013 Dwayne Vincent)



Wish list for song

Drums
Bass
Keys

Forget about your sorrow
Forget about your pain
Look forward tomorrow
And all that it can bring

But I'll Say

Where you going to go
Where can you be reached
Tell em I'll be hanging out at the beach
Where the sunset sinks

Where you going to go
Where can you be reached
Sitting here sipping on another drink
Where the sunset sinks

Forget about your problems
Forget about your cares
Have to start living
One life that we all share

But I'll say

Where you going to go
Where can you be reached
Tell em I'll be hanging out at the beach
Where the sunset sinks

Where you going to go
Where can you be reached
Sitting here sipping on another drink
Where the sunset sinks

« Last Edit: October 30, 2013, 10:02:46 PM by Vincent »

August 23, 2013, 11:11:07 PM

Song may need a bridge or lead instrument break however I left lots of room to add instruments and a new part or two.

just need to edit out some of the chorus vox parts to add bride or lead parts.

 8)

May have found a drummer for this tune on another site (fingers crossed)

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August 30, 2013, 08:49:20 PM
Hey, Vincent, nice song!!!

I can´t provide you with anything you asked :) but I really liked the song.
I recorded (very quickly)some rhythm guitars over the last chorus and would like to know if it's along the lines you had in mind for the song.
this is just the final chorus. my overdubs start at 00:13.

hope you like
« Last Edit: August 30, 2013, 08:57:05 PM by stickfigure »

September 05, 2013, 08:56:31 PM

Thanks for the interest.

I like what you did...I think you could do even better if I posted chords.

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Still need drums before doing any final takes/recordings.

Will post a drumless if any interest.

Song also needs a bridge.

Thanks again.

September 06, 2013, 08:16:30 AM
Some rough draft bridge lyrics.

Was thinking of trying electric guitar and keys for bridge (once its written)

(chorus)
Where the sunset

(Bridge)
Sinks into the dark
It captures my heart
Another day is gone for good

Close your eyes while its dark
Wait for a new day to start
Don't let it be misunderstood

But I'll Say

(Chorus)

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September 07, 2013, 09:18:10 AM
sure! do that and i'll try to figure out some more guitar parts to the other sections.
btw, when you say keys, you mean something piano, hammond or mellotron, or do you have some synth stuff in mind?

I´ll wait for the bridge ;)

cheers!


Thanks for the interest.

I like what you did...I think you could do even better if I posted chords.

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Still need drums before doing any final takes/recordings.

Will post a drumless if any interest.

Song also needs a bridge.

Thanks again.

September 07, 2013, 10:21:34 AM
Great!

You keep working on guitar filler (and other instruments if you want as well)

Open to all keyboard sounds (even Dubstep)

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Things needed for song

Bridge (working on it)
Drums
Bass
Keyboard filler
Guitar filler
Other instruments filler

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Once song is done and final tracks are done I will post all tracks for mixing...no sense uploading my stems yet until they are final takes.

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September 07, 2013, 11:20:59 PM
ok, here's some more guitar ;)

https://www.dropbox.com/s/umk1534mpwbfnbd/Where%20The%20Sunset%20Sinks%20-%20demo%202.mp3

I'll try to figure out something more while waiting for the bridge  8)

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September 08, 2013, 08:41:24 AM
Nice song, Vince, as usual. I like the added guitars. And, as usual, I don't really see the need for keys. Maybe it's just my lack of imagination, but to me the song sounds complete (in terms of arrangement).

Regards,
  Steffen

September 08, 2013, 09:10:38 AM

Thanks Sto.

The added guitars sound great Stickfigure.

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Didn't get a chance to work on a bridge yet.

We can either create a bridge or have some instrumental time with the chorus parts (remove some vocals for lead instruments)

Need drums.

I have my eye on a few used kits on Kijiji however I wont have the cash for drums for a few weeks (taking a part time job for a week or two to pay for them)