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Author Topic: Across The Great Divide  (Read 5038 times)

May 01, 2012, 07:06:50 AM
Im still working on this...dont have drum stems so I used a simple fake drum beat for now.

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/8412827/My%20Women.mp3

Im renaming song "My Women"...this is getting copywrited and submitted into my TV and Film catalogue...might be incentive for a decent singer to sing this if there are any kicking around...I hear lead vocals in the style of Robert Plant or John Lennon...I may try vocals myself first as a guide.

I need bass again because song is in a new direction now I think...Im looking for zeppelin style bass...I may do that myself as well unless someone blows my mind with their bass track...when I say blow my mind I mean its better than what I could do.

Need keyboards...Zeppelin,Beatles,Lennon style or whatever sounds good.

Lyrics


(backround vox in verses...My_________Wo________men________


Wheres my women
Where can she be
My little women
That Im glad to see

Im just sitting here
The day is done
Reading the daily news
Our Time Has come

But Wheres my women
Where can she be
My lovely women
who thinks of me.

Im just sitting here
The day is done
Reading the daily news
Our Time Has come

To an end

to an end

solo break

Wheres my women
Where can she be
My lonley women
glad to see me

She just sitting there
Her day is done
Brushing her beautifull hair
Our time has come

To an end

To an end


Im just sitting here
The day is done
Finished the daily news
Now Its time to run

Run to my women
who loves me
My darling women
Till eternity

My women
My women

May 01, 2012, 11:32:12 AM

Did a bit of vocal melody at beginning...Bit nasally in one part.

Its starting to shape into a song a bit now...just need a better singer perhaps and some lead filler by keys and guitar...also need bass and better drums.

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/8412827/My%20women%20Vocal%20example.mp3