EQ on everything sounds really nice! You may have to carve some hi mids out of the guitars to make room for vocals, but overall sounds really nice! A few things:
1) This mix is really
quiet… but it looks like that's already been addressed.
2) The snare could actually come down in the mix a couple of db. If you listen to the mix at low level you'll hear that the snare is the loudest thing in the song. As a drummer myself, I understand the need for thunder and lighting… but when mixing I always double and triple check my drum levels to make sure they're not out of balance.
3) This may be my drummer bias… but I'd like to hear a nice long reverb tail on that snare during the verses. In fact the drums could be a little more wet overall. Try crushing the room mic or adding a digital Studio/Room verb.
4) I know that low end heavy bass is a touchy subject with this genre of music, but I'd actually like to hear a little more 60Hz to fatten up the low end.
5) The rhythm guitars during the verses don't feel very wide to me. Are they hard panned? If so, you may want to think about adding 2 opposing guitar or percussion tracks hard panned to really widen the sound stage.
I know this is all subjective stuff, so take it with a grain of salt.
Really nice track though. Looking forward to hearing it with vocals. In fact, hearing the vocals in context will probably change everything I just commented above.