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Author Topic: Rough Mix/Song Idea - "Deaf Ears" - Critique Requested (Metal Song)  (Read 429 times)

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December 04, 2014, 10:44:48 AM
Hi all,

Please critique the song and mix for a rough song idea I have (heavily inspired by one of my favourite bands Alice In Chains):

https://soundcloud.com/jonathan-linton-3/deaf-ears-rev4-20141129

JONATHAN LINTON – DEAF EARS
(Words by Jonathan Linton, Music by Jonathan Linton)

Tragedy of justice here I sit
Guilty of a crime I didn' commit
A lazy prosecutor took the easy way out
Skillfully erasing shadow of doubt

My cries and fears, they fall on deaf ears
No one hears, it falls on deaf ears

An eight by ten box is now my home
The crooked prosecutor's free to roam
The wheels of justice ran me over, appeals have been denied
Now I know injustice will preside

My cries and fears, they fall on deaf ears
No one hears, it falls on deaf ears

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December 05, 2014, 11:00:45 PM
cool song man. but seems a lil slow, try it a lil faster with better reverb on the vox or eq the reverb with more highs, less mid
cheers